Newsletter-B

by Kung
(Siem Reap,Cambodia)

Newsletter-B: Original Text:


Sharing experiences exchange between CBHEP and other community development organization agencies, to get know effective clues of project implementation. Reportedly JVC is an senior operated organization based in Kampong Speu province, which based on providing water filters as the same as CBHEP. We conducted a trip there and had exchanged experiences regarding to community based-result development including healthcare and quality of water filters provision.
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Revised Text:

Experience sharing exchange between CBHEP and other community development organization agencies, to learn effective means of project implementation:

Reportedly, JVC is a senior established organization based in Kampong Speu province, with a goal of providing water filters, the same as CBHEP. We made a trip there and exchanged experiences regarding community-based result developments, including; health-care and quality of water filters provision.

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