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No Longer At Ease Review
by Laylah
The story begins with the main character, Obi Okonkwo, who is in the court room accused of corruption and bribery. Both the judge and the audience surprise how a young man they used to trust could have made bad decisions. Obi's mother has recently died and his engagement to Clara has just ended, he feels sorry and tears springs to his eyes. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Revised Text: The story begins with the main character, Obi Okonkwo, in a courtroom accused of corruption and bribery. Both the judge and the audience are surprised at how a young man they used to trust could have made bad decisions. Obi's mother has recently died and his engagement to Clara has just ended, he feels sorry and tears spring to his eyes. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. |