Nowadays

Original Text:


Nowadays, with the growth of industry and technology, providing energy is one of the most important issues in human life. Simultaneously to producing electrical energy in the nineteenth century, transfer of electrical energy was considered. Development of technology results in establishment of today's complex systems for electrical energy transfer.

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Revised Text:

Nowadays, with the growth of industry and technology, providing energy is one of the most important issues in human life. Simultaneously with the producing of electrical energy in the nineteenth century, the transfer of electrical energy was considered. Development of technology has resulted in the establishment of today's complex systems for electrical energy transfer.

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