One Flew Over

by Alex
(MD)

Original Text: One Flew Over


One Flew over the Cuckoo's Nest offers its' readers a perspective that people must comply with society's needs and rules.

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Revised Text:

One Flew over the Cuckoo's Nest offers its' readers the view that people must comply with society's needs and rules.

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