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Online Toys

Original Text: Online Toys

NINGBO ORIENT CRAFT CO., LTD./ NINGBO BANNER CRAFT CO.,LTD. has been engaged in the production of promotional products and gifts over fifteen years. with more than 500 skilled workers and technicians, and several workshops covering an area of 15,000sqm, and has high ability of designing and developing various POLYURETHANE (PU) SQUEEZIE TOYS, STATIONERY,KEY CHAINS, PLASTIC GIFTS. etc.Products are suitable for gifts, giveaway, advertising promotion, whole sales, etc.,which are with CE, ASTM, FDA approval and selling very well in America, Europe, Japan, Southeast Asian countries and regions, etc. Factory has complete management system, which is ISO 9000 approval and in the applying of SA8000. All of these are the key factors that ensure the factory's successful expansion.
# The factory's tenet is "Cooperation, Creation, concreteness and Efficiency." It has stuck to the principle of "Quality First and Consumers Upmost" in production and markeing. Constant efforts have been made for quality improvement and better service. THANK YOU!

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Revised Text:

NINGBO ORIENT CRAFT CO., LTD./ NINGBO BANNER CRAFT CO.,LTD. has been engaged in the production of promotional products and gifts for over fifteen years. With more than 500 skilled workers and technicians, and several workshops covering an area of 15,000 sqm., we have a high ability for designing and developing; POLYURETHANE (PU) SQUEEZIE TOYS, STATIONERY, KEY CHAINS, PLASTIC GIFTS, etc.

Products are suitable for gifts, giveaways, advertising promotion, wholesale, etc. These have CE, ASTM, and FDA approvals and are selling very well in America, Europe, Japan, Southeast Asian countries and elsewhere. Our factory has a complete management system, which is ISO 9000 approved, and we are applying for the SA8000. All of these are key factors that ensure the factory's successful expansion.

Our factory's motto is "Cooperation, Creation, Concreteness and Efficiency". It has stuck to the principle of "Quality First and Consumers Up-most" in production and marketing. Constant efforts have been made for quality improvement and better service.

THANK YOU!

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