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by Ornela
Going to school give to us the opportunity to know a lot of people, as a students, teachers and other persons who work in this huge institution. In high school in my country, Albania in 4 years I had 3 different history’s teachers: Genti, who loved his job like no other, Gjergji who was a funny teacher perhaps even by his young age, and the last one Ladi who hated his work ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Revised Text: Going to school gives us the opportunity to know many people; as students, teachers and others who work in this huge institution. In high school in my country, Albania, I have had 3 different history teachers in 4 years: Genti, who loved his job like no other; Gjergji who was a funny teacher, perhaps even since he was young; and the last one, Ladi, who hated his work. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. |