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Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.

by Jane White
(Tennessee)

Original Text: Our truest life is when we are in dreams awake.

When we are in dreams, we can't tell the differance between what is real and what's not real. We must awake to find out what is reality.

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Revised Text:

When we are in dreams, we can't tell the difference between what is real and what is not. We must awaken to find out what is reality.

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