Peach Tree School of the Arts

by Fred
(Denver CO)

Original Text: Peach Tree School of the Arts


Summer Schedule Changes

Because of an increased demand for certain classes, we have scheduled additional drawing, acrylic painting, jazz dance and recorder classes. Note that these are all advanced classes and are for students aged ten too thirteen. Classes begin on the week of June 4, meet weekly, and run through the end off the summer session. The fees, days, and times for these new classes are:
Advanced Drawing, $125, Tuesdays, noon to 2 P.M.
Advanced Acrylic Painting, $125, Wednesdays, noon to 1:30 P.M.
Jazz Dance II, $85, Mondays, 2 P.M. to 3:15 P.M.
Recorder Ensemble, $45, Thursdays, 1 P.M. to 2 P.M.

Registration forms are available at the front desk. If you plan to mail in your registration form, please review the following checklist:
Include a check for the class fee.
Include a separate check for the annual $10 registration fee if you haven’t paid it yet this year.
Remember to include an emergency contact name and number on the registration form.
In the lower left corner of the envelope write “Summer Session Registration” to ensure that we process your registration before the summer session begins.
For more details, contact Marcus Cody at the front desk.

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Revised Text:

Summer Schedule Changes

Due to an increased demand for certain classes, we have scheduled additional drawing, acrylic painting, jazz dance and recorder classes. Note: these are all advanced classes and are for students aged ten too thirteen. Classes begin on the week of June 4, will meet weekly, and will run through the end of the summer session. The fees, days, and times for these new classes are;

• Advanced Drawing, $125, Tuesdays, noon to 2 P.M.
• Advanced Acrylic Painting, $125, Wednesdays, noon to 1:30 P.M.
• Jazz Dance II, $85, Mondays, 2 P.M. to 3:15 P.M.
• Recorder Ensemble, $45, Thursdays, 1 P.M. to 2 P.M.

Registration forms are available at the front desk. If you plan to mail in your registration form, please review the following checklist;

• Include a check for the class fee.
• Include a separate check for the annual $10 registration fee if you haven’t paid it yet this year.
• Remember to include an emergency contact name and number on the registration form.
• In the lower left corner of the envelope write “Summer Session Registration” to ensure that we process your registration before the summer session begins.

For more details, contact Marcus Cody at the front desk.

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