Pelvic Kidney

by HANEY
(CR)

Original Text: Pelvic Kidney


I wish to report that I’ve discovered during Ultrasound screening ‎that I have one kidney in my pelvis so I hope you will answer for ‎the seriousness of this situation and what the potential damage in ‎the future and on the possibility of hereditary transmission as the ‎information available on the Internet on this subject is extremely ‎rare
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Looking forward to your cooperation in this regard.‎

Thanking you in advance for your assistance.‎

With my best regards.‎

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Revised Text:

I wish to report that I discovered, during Ultrasound screening, that I have one kidney in my pelvis, so I hope you will explain the seriousness of this situation and any potential damage in the future, and the possibility of hereditary transmission of the condition.

Information available on the Internet on this subject is extremely rare.

I am looking forward to your cooperation in this regard.

Thanking you in advance for your assistance.

With my best regards,


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Jun 20, 2011
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Pelvic kidney
by: Lisa

Hi
mine are playing up causing great pain. I have one in my pelvis and one floating all over !! Having operation soon

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