Plan Change

by Dawn
(CA)

Original Text: Plan Change


The original plan was considered due to low/no product flow, and the team thought it's a good time to put tool down for tool upgrade. It was with the valid reason. But through this week we found the current process having a lot of issues and need to fix before the critical yield product wave coming in 2 weeks. The program got some wafers accelerated to the sector by tomorrow and we have a lot of process work to do to enable the process ready in the next 2 weeks so we need the tool to be up in this period.

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Revised Text:

The original plan was considered due to low/no product flow, and the team thought it would be a good time to put tools down for a tool upgrade. It was a valid reason but this week we have found that the current process is having a lot of issues and needs to be fixed before the critical yield product wave coming in 2 weeks.

The program got some wafers accelerated to the sector by tomorrow, and we have a lot of process work to do to enable the process to be ready in the next two weeks. We need the tools to be up in this period.

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