by Fernando
(Acero)
Original Text: Promotion
Dave i have updated my preferance list and i have choosen The ramona grasslands as my first pick. I would like the oppurtunity to expand my carer and knowledge.
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Revised Text:
Dave,
I have updated my preference list, and I have chosen The Ramona Grasslands as my first pick.
I would like the opportunity to expand my career and knowledge.
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