by Fernando

Original Text: Promotion

Dave i have updated my preferance list and i have choosen The ramona grasslands as my first pick. I would like the oppurtunity to expand my carer and knowledge.


Revised Text:


I have updated my preference list, and I have chosen The Ramona Grasslands as my first pick.

I would like the opportunity to expand my career and knowledge.


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