Suzy

Original Text: Suzy


Suzy,
That the form that my mother has sent to you, it seems I've overlooked some things that i don't notice myself, my mother notices things about me. So please use that in reference. i hope it helps you. it was really great meeting you today! iI am very eager to looking forward to the next appointment. its hard for me to contain all that two-part that you said to save that for next appointment. i have SO much things to tell you in artfully way. i think you've just unblocked my art block today. the drawing that i told you about its same thing i did today, but different symbols. i was struggling trying to find meanings for it. thank you soooo much. I'm going to thank my cousin Tiffany for this. again, Thank you so much!!!!!!!!!

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Revised Text:

Suzy,

It seems that I overlooked some things on the form that my mother sent you. My mother notices things about me that i don't notice myself. So please use that in reference. I hope it helps you.

It was really great meeting you today. I am very eagerly looking forward to the next appointment.

It's hard for me to remember all that two-part that you said to save that for the next appointment. I have so many things to tell you about art. I think you've just un-blocked my art block today.

The drawing that I told you about is the same thing I did today, but with different symbols. I was struggling, trying to find meaning in it.

Thank you so much. I'm going to thank my cousin Tiffany for this. Again, thank you so much!

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