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Original Text: Test


No active response from the parent is required to complete the registration. The parental control procedure is a mere fiction. Should the child enter any fictitious e-mail during the registration process, the parents would never find out that the transaction ever occurred.

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Revised Text:

No active response from the parent is required to complete the registration. The parental control procedure is a mere fiction. If the child entered a fictitious e-mail address during the registration process, the parents would never find out that the transaction had occurred.

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