Testing Check

by Joseph
(Singapore)

Original Text: Testing Check


Some experts believe, that PAP would be bold enough to field few `new recruit’ who only has one term of experience, to take on the challenge in the SMC.

In the list, it is highly possible that some of whom may have minister potential.
Sam Tan Chin Siong, Teo Ser Luck,Lee Yi Shyan, Inderjit Singh, Halimah Yacob, Heng Chee How and Charles Chong.

According to Straits Time Reports, If PAP carry such action, One of the reason is to meet the needs of the youth voters, whom have greater desire to hear more oppose views in our political arena. The basis of the above theory is that PAP rather loose the SMC, rather than GRC.

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Revised Text:

Some experts believe that PAP would be bold enough to field `new recruits’, with only one term of experience, to take on the challenge in the SMC.

On the list, it is highly possible that some of these may have minister potential;
Sam Tan Chin Siong, Teo Ser Luck,Lee Yi Shyan, Inderjit Singh, Halimah Yacob, Heng Chee How and Charles Chong.

According to Straits Times reports, if PAP takes this action, one of the reasons is to meet the needs of the youth voters who have a greater desire to hear opposing views in our political arena. The basis of the above theory is that the PAP would rather loose the SMC than the GRC.

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