Thank you

Original Text: Thank you


Dr. Mr.

Thank you for the Quality Client Report award and the engraved IPOD shuffle. I’m very pleased and honored to win. It means a lot to me. I appreciate the CORA USA team and Vendors recognizing my dedication. I'm proud to work for a company that cares about their employees. There an inspiration to us all, and truly make the success that it is.
Thank you for all that you do. I couldn’t do this without the CORA USA Team and Vendor support.
I will continue to work hard consistently for CORA USA.

Thanks again
Kind Regards,

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Revised Text:

Dr. Mr.

Thank you for the Quality Client Report Award and the engraved iPOD shuffle. I’m very pleased and honored to win, it means a lot to me.

I appreciate the CORA USA team and the vendors recognizing my dedication. I'm proud to work for a company that cares about its employees. It is an inspiration to us all, and that care truly makes it the success that it is.

Thank you for all your efforts. I couldn’t have done this without the CORA USA Team and vendors' support.

I will continue to consistently work hard for CORA USA.

Thanks again.

Kind Regards,


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