Home
Writing Help Free Proofreading
Search
2010 Archive
2011 Archive #1
2011 Archive #2
Questions?
Resource Books
Online Resources
Writing Basics The Words
More Words
The Structure
Punctuation
Get Organized
Writing Style
Website Information Contribute
New Additions
Privacy Policy
Off The Record
About Me
Sitemap
Tell your story
Subscribe To This Site
XML RSS
Add to Google
Add to My Yahoo!
Add to My MSN
Subscribe with Bloglines
 

Thank you

Original Text: Thank you

Dr. Mr.

Thank you for the Quality Client Report award and the engraved IPOD shuffle. I’m very pleased and honored to win. It means a lot to me. I appreciate the CORA USA team and Vendors recognizing my dedication. I'm proud to work for a company that cares about their employees. There an inspiration to us all, and truly make the success that it is.
Thank you for all that you do. I couldn’t do this without the CORA USA Team and Vendor support.
I will continue to work hard consistently for CORA USA.

Thanks again
Kind Regards,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Revised Text:

Dr. Mr.

Thank you for the Quality Client Report Award and the engraved iPOD shuffle. I’m very pleased and honored to win, it means a lot to me.

I appreciate the CORA USA team and the vendors recognizing my dedication. I'm proud to work for a company that cares about its employees. It is an inspiration to us all, and that care truly makes it the success that it is.

Thank you for all your efforts. I couldn’t have done this without the CORA USA Team and vendors' support.

I will continue to consistently work hard for CORA USA.

Thanks again.

Kind Regards,


Editor:

1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed.

2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish.


Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list.

Click here to post comments.