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The closer adventure is my travel to old darkness close to Hope city

by Vida
(Canada)

I want to check this sentence for me thanks.

The closer adventure is my travel to old darkness tunnels close to Hope city.

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Editor:

I'm not really sure of your intended meaning but one possibility is,


"The closer adventure was my trip to the old, dark tunnels close to Hope city."

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