TKM Essay

by Rebeca
(California)

Original Text: TKM Essay


I need this profred and i am in eight grade and these are my thesis and my 3 topic sentences for my essayon the book to kill a mocking bird

The theme of innocence is demenstrated by the characters Tom Robinson, Boo Radley, and Mayella Ewell. Some characters like Tom Robinsonare truely innocent, although many people are racist in Maycomb. Maycomb is affraid to admit to someone of there own citizens doing wrong things, so they blame it on other people like Boo Radley. Just because Mayella Ewell has a racist father and is from a white family, doesn't necesarily mean that she is a person who is racits too.

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Revised Text:

The theme of innocence is demonstrated by the characters; Tom Robinson, Boo Radley, and Mayella Ewell.

Some characters like Tom Robinson are truly innocent, although many people are racist in Maycomb.

People in Maycomb are afraid to admit that one of their own citizens may be doing wrong things, so they blame it on other people, like Boo Radley.

Just because Mayella Ewell has a racist father, and is from a white family, doesn't necessarily mean that she is a racist too.

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