Trip to Dubai

Original Text: Trip to Dubai


As I mentioned you yesterday, I had call with Mamdouh today. As you also suggested he offered me to come to Dubai for an intensive meeting with his team.

I am going to organize my trip for last week of April.

Do you think I should meet with any other people during my visit who might help us to bring Global X expertise to Turkey.

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Revised Text:

As I mentioned to you yesterday that I would, I had a phone conversation with Mamdouh today. As you also anticipated, he asked me to come to Dubai for an intensive meeting with his team.

I am going to organize my trip for the last week in April.

Do you think I should meet with any other people during my visit, who might help us bring Global X expertise to Turkey?

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