Visa Cancellation

Original Text: Visa Cancellation


Dear Xxx

With reference to your email, please note that we given you a month notice to found another job or we are obliged to cancel your visa.

I apologize to reject your request to have another period.

You are requested to submit your passport to finalize the process of exit visa.

Best Regards

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Revised Text:

Dear Xxx

In reference to your email, please note that we are giving you one months' notice to find another job or we are obliged to cancel your visa.

I regret that we must reject your request to have an additional period of time.

Please submit your passport to finalize the process for an exit visa.

Best Regards,

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