Cover Letter

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In response to your advertisement, I am writing this letter to apply for a full-time position. I have both the skills and the drive to contribute growth and success to your company. Therefore, I would like to be considered for employment with your firm. My resume is enclosed for your review.
From 1995 to 2007, I worked in a management consulting company in Iran. During that period, I played different roles such as strategic planner, system analyst, business analyst, and project manager in a range of projects like strategic planning projects, business process improvement projects, and information system implementation projects. I have accumulated experience and knowledge of more than 10 projects in diverse public and private sections, i.e. oil & gas, chain stores, investment, science & research, municipality, cultural affairs, sports, and so on.
From 2007 to 2010, I joined a postgraduate degree in ‘Operations and Management Information Systems’ in the Faculty of Business and Accountancy, University of Malaya, Malaysia. I have spent the last three years on ‘critical factors affecting ERP systems implementation success’.
Thank you for reading my letter and resume. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications, experience and skills more extensively in an interview. I can be reached at the above telephone number or email.

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Edited Text:

I am writing to apply for a full-time position in response to your advertisement. I have both the skills and the drive to contribute growth and success to your company and would like to be considered for employment with your firm.

My resume is enclosed for your review.

From 1995 to 2007, I worked in a management consulting company in Iran. During that period, I played several roles, including: strategic planner, system analyst, business analyst, and project manager in a range of projects such as strategic planning, business process improvement, and information systems implementation. I have accumulated experience and knowledge in more than 10 projects in diverse public and private sectors, i.e.: oil & gas, chain stores, investment, science & research, municipality, cultural affairs, sports, and others.

From 2007 to 2010, I was enrolled in a postgraduate degree program in ‘Operations and Management Information Systems’ with the Faculty of Business and Accountancy, University of Malaya, Malaysia. I have worked the last three years on ‘Critical Factors Affecting ERP Systems Implementation Success.’

Thank you for reviewing my letter and resume. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss my qualifications, experience and skills more extensively in an interview.

I can be reached at the above telephone number or by email.

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