Expo

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Original Text:


Visitors view exhibits on an expo held in Dalian City, Liaoning Province, China, on May 12, 2010. The three-day-long, 24th Annual China Dalian Import & Export Commodities and Dalian International Industrial Expo kicked off on Wednesday with nearly 1,000 companies from over 10 countries and regions on show.

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Revised Text:

Visitors view exhibits at an expo held in Dalian City, Liaoning Province, China, on May 12, 2010.

The three-day-long, 24th Annual China Dalian Import & Export Commodities and Dalian International Industrial Expo kicked off on Wednesday with nearly 1,000 companies from over 10 countries and regions exhibiting.

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