Field Visit

by Anna Michael
(Tanzania)

Original Text:


TGNP is expected to collaborate with various community groups in order to establish community knowledge centers. IGN Kisarawe was one of the centres we visited; this centre is well established with a number of 3 rooms, one computer, two colored printers, Television, landline telephone connected with internet,tables and chairs

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Revised Text:

TGNP is expected to collaborate with various community groups in order to establish community knowledge centers.

IGN Kisarawe was one of the centres we visited. This centre is well established, with; a number of 3 rooms, one computer, two color printers, Television, a land-line telephone connected to the internet, tables and chairs

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