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FIRST TEST

by SATISH K SINGH
(INDIA)

Original Text:

Mam I want to work in your group only. I don’t want to apply anywhere now and the time factor can be managed. Kindly, move forward by sending a grant request for my POSDOC to your university / country authorities, to work under your supervision.

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Revised Text:


Ma'am, I want to work in your group only. I don’t want to apply anywhere else now, and the time factor can be managed.

Kindly proceed by sending a grant request for my Post-Doc to your university/country authorities, to work under your supervision.

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