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Understanding gene-environment relationship could really save lives. Gene by itself can’t increase our risk to have the disorder. If we control our bad habit and live healthy life, we could probably not develop the symptoms. However some environment factors we can control and some we can’t control. For example, we can control our diet by eating healthy food that is high in antioxidant, but we can’t control radiation or viral infection that can damage our gene

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Revised Text:

Understanding the gene-environment relationship could really save lives. Genes by themselves can’t increase our risk of having a disorder.

If we control our bad habits and live healthy lives, we could probably not develop the disorders. However, some environmental factors we can control and some we can’t. For example, we can control our diets by eating healthy foods high in antioxidants, but we can’t control radiation or viral infections that can damage our genes.

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