Lets Start a Band

by Stephanie
(Tulsa, USA)

Original Text: Lets Start a Band


Hi! I'm Stephanie. My dad and I are looking to start a Country/ Blues/ Red-Dirt/ Classic Rock kinda band. My dad is an awesome guitarist, and taught me. I am a trained Vocal Performer. I went to OSU, and majored in Vocal Perfrormance, but because there's not really a need for Opera Singers in Oklahoma, I decided to use my voice in a different enviroment.. I am 21 years old. I love all kinds of music, and write my own music. My dad and I have a huge repertoire of music we have both written.

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Revised Text:

Hi! I'm Stephanie.

My dad and me are looking to start a Country/ Blues/ Red-Dirt/ Classic Rock kinda band. My dad is an awesome guitarist, and taught me.

I am 21 years old and a trained Vocal Performer. I went to OSU and majored in Vocal Performance, but because there's not really a need for Opera Singers in Oklahoma, I decided to use my voice in a different environment. I love all kinds of music, and write my own.

My dad and me have a huge repertoire of music, written by both of us.

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