Newsletter-C

by Kung
(Siem Reap,Cambodia)

Original Text: Newsletter-C


By the inspiration and devotion of Dr. King Gan wishes to be visible of better condition of living of the local residents in the remote areas at the middle of woods—-Cham Resh village over 400 families live. So far the projects have been being in progress . An insight to develop this paradigm isolated-and far village is keeping a move, in which our CBHEP project was focused on the community health development, to provide the clean water through 90 water filters, 22 wells and also work together with BFT based on informal education and income generation. Moreover, CBHEP provided dozens of mosquitoes nets donated by King to villagers. Hopefully, Cham Resh village is improving a new image in future.

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Revised Text:

With the inspiration of Dr. King Gan's devotion to visibly bettering the living conditions of local residents in remote forest areas, we are working in Cham Resh village, where more than 400 families live.

Projects are currently in progress, giving insights to developing this paradigm for isolated and distant villages, in which our CBHEP project has focused on community health development; providing clean water through 90 water filters, 22 wells, and also working together with the BFT on informal education and income generation. CBHEP has also provided dozens of mosquito nets (donated by King) to villagers.

Hopefully, Cham Resh village is improving and will have a new image in the future.

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