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Sheriff Report

Original Text: Sheriff Report

Item 1: 11-10766 Burglary Investigation-Deputy Sellers responded to the 8000 blk of FM 879. Caller advised someone had broken into his residence sometime today and taken items. Deputy Sellers cleared the call with an Offense Report.

Item 2: 11-10770 Pursuit- Deputy Sowder checked in pursuit on 287 near Lakeview Road. The pursuit continued until the vehicle wrecked out on Lakeview Road where it turns back North. At that point Deputy Sowder advised he had one running on foot. Deputy Sowder then advised he had 2 in custody. Corporal Thompson responded to the scene. Deputy Sowder brought Peacock,William MW 05.03.54 to jail for evading arrest. Deputy Sowder cleared the call with an offense report.

Item 3: 11- 10775 Evading Arrest- additional service number in reference to item 2: Deputy Sowder cleared with an offense report.

Item 4: 11-10769 Meet Complainant-Deputy Atilano and Deputy Cheek responded to Station 1 to meet with a complainant in reference to the complainant’s brother in law saying his ex-wife is making threats against the complainant. Deputy Atilano and Deputy Cheek cleared the call with an incident report.

Item 5: 11-10776 Harassment- Deputy Littleton responded to the 3200 block of FM 1446 in Waxahachie. The complainant advised someone keeps calling his residence harassing him by phone. Deputy Littleton cleared the call with an incident report.

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Revised Text:

Item 1: 11-10766 Burglary Investigation
Deputy Sellers responded to the 8000 blk of FM 879. Caller advised someone had broken into his residence sometime today and taken items. Deputy Sellers cleared the call with an Offense Report.

Item 2: 11-10770 Pursuit
Deputy Sowder checked in while in pursuit on 287 near Lakeview Road. The pursuit continued until the vehicle wrecked on Lakeview Road, where it turns back North. At that point Deputy Sowder advised he had one person running on foot. Deputy Sowder then advised he had 2 in custody. Corporal Thompson responded to the scene. Deputy Sowder transported Peacock,William MW 05.03.54 to jail for evading arrest. Deputy Sowder cleared the call with an offense report.

Item 3: 11- 10775 Evading Arrest
Additional service number in reference to item 2: Deputy Sowder cleared with an offense report.

Item 4: 11-10769 Meet Complainant
Deputy Atilano and Deputy Cheek responded to Station 1 to meet with a complainant in reference to the complainant’s brother-in-law saying that the complainant's ex-wife is making threats against him. Deputy Atilano and Deputy Cheek cleared the call with an incident report.

Item 5: 11-10776 Harassment
Deputy Littleton responded to the 3200 block of FM 1446 in Waxahachie. The complainant advised that someone keeps calling his residence, harassing him by phone. Deputy Littleton cleared the call with an incident report.

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