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It was a pleasure to meet and speak with you all of you today to discuss the opportunity for possible employment with Jones company. The position sounds interesting and challenging. It encompasses many of the interests that I hope I was able to express to you, including organizational support and working on a variety of projects. With my diverse background I feel I would be an asset to the William Mitchell community, and I thank you in advance for the consideration you have given me. Please feel free to contact me with any further questions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Revised Text: It was a pleasure to meet and speak with all of you today to discuss the opportunity for possible employment with Jones company. The position sounds interesting and challenging. It encompasses many of my interests, which I hope I was able to communicate to you, including; organizational support, and working on a variety of projects. With my diverse background, I feel I would be an asset to the Xxxxxxx Xxxxxxxx community, and I thank you in advance for the consideration you have given me. Please feel free to contact me with any further questions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. |