Advance Money Request

by Poo
(Koh Samui)

Original Text: Advance Money Request

As per discussion yesterday, please arrange an advance money to be transferred to Khun Luck of 10,000 baht (ten thousand baht) for her using as emergency petty-cash.
Both villas receiving guests yesterday and all her petty cash are waiting for JB to sign.

Please find memo in attachment. Thank you very much for your help in this matter.

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Revised Text:


As per our discussion yesterday, please arrange for advance money to be transferred to Khun Luck, in the amount of 10,000 baht (ten thousand baht) for her use as emergency petty-cash.

Both villas received guests yesterday and all of her petty cash is waiting for JB's signature.

Please find a memo in attachment.

Thank you very much for your help in this matter.

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