Original Text: Essay 2
The relationship between Matt and Kate started to gradually mend as Kate realized that the standards she used to judge Matt were beyond ones capability and therefore, wrong.
The relationship between Matt and Kate had gradually started to mend when Kate realized that the standards she used to judge Matt were beyond her capability, and therefore, wrong.
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