by Faizal Amry
(Jakarta, Indonesia)
Original Text: Farmhand
Farmhand Machinery Asia Pacific Ltd. was established in 1988 and has many years experience in the manufacture and supply of the farm implements, Jinma tractors and others farm machines.
We fully understand the needs of the industry are constantly researching and developing new products as the request of our customers. An ever increasing number of our machines are designed in Europe and built in China. We have longterm strategy on marketing and have well sales network in Europe and North America as well as other countries, so you can be confident that you are dealing with the manufacturer for machines and spare parts. Customer service is core to our business philosophy and we endeavour to ensure that each and every enjoys both the initial experience of buying machines from us and also the ongoing service from our expert staff.
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Revised Text:
Farmhand Machinery, Asia Pacific, Ltd. was established in 1988 and has many years experience in the manufacture and supply of farm implements, Jinma tractors, and other farm machines.
We fully understand the needs of the industry and are constantly researching and developing new products requested by our customers. An ever increasing number of our machines are designed in Europe and built in China.
We have a long term strategy for marketing and have good sales networks in Europe and North America, as well as other countries. You can be confident that you are dealing with the manufacturer of machines and spare parts.
Customer service is the core of our business philosophy and we endeavour to ensure that each and every customer enjoys both the initial experience of buying machines from us, and the ongoing service from our expert staff.
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