Grammer help/identify the errors

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Why are great numbers of students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers. Benjamin Franklin said; A penny saved is a penny earned”. This principle applies to the american and foreign online student. Todays students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters and supplies.

Revised Text:

Why are great numbers of students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers? Benjamin Franklin said, "A penny saved is a penny earned.” This principle applies to American and also foreign online students. Today's students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters, and supplies.

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