Payment Letter
by Jessica Martinez
(Syracuse, NY)
Original Text: Payment Letter
Philomena,
Please send Brian the total amount of $4,000 which includes $800 of interest in the payment. I would have preferred to give him the money personally before I settled in Turkey permanently , but I never received a call from him. Please wish me all the best in all my endeavors.
Best wishes,
Jessica
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Revised Text:Philomena
Please send Brian the total payment amount of $4,000, which includes $800 in interest.
I would have preferred to give him the money personally before I settled in Turkey permanently, but I never received a call from him. Please wish me all the best in all my endeavors.
Best wishes,
Jessica
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