Original Text: Visa Cancellation
With reference to your email, please note that we given you a month notice to found another job or we are obliged to cancel your visa.
I apologize to reject your request to have another period.
You are requested to submit your passport to finalize the process of exit visa.
In reference to your email, please note that we are giving you one months' notice to find another job or we are obliged to cancel your visa.
I regret that we must reject your request to have an additional period of time.
Please submit your passport to finalize the process for an exit visa.
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