by Casey
Word Choice
He laid there util the ambulance arrived and took him to the hospital, which was only a few blocks away.
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Editor:
It seems better to use the past tense of the irregular verb "lie" in the sentence.
Corrected Text:
He lay there until the ambulance arrived and took him to the hospital, which was only a few blocks away.
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